All Comments on 'Turning Straight'

I love your writing - and I love this story.

Anna

xxx

Hot erotic and very very sensual

Wonderful, highly erotic first story; captivating, fast paced sex that peaked perfectly. Yes, maybe in the next chapter, if there is one, we learn more about Christa and Rosa, but breathless introduction. Keep sharing wherever your imagination takes you. Nice - 5 stars.

This story needs to continue. We need to see how far they go together. Awesome story. So hot. Please keep going.

That was lovely.

Beautiful technique in describing the first time to try Lesbian sex - with an experienced lover. Please keep writing. L.

Well, you turned me! 😉

You told a lovely story in such a well-paced, erotic way. We’d love to learn more about this couple and anyone else your imagination cojures.

Well written, you clearly have a talent for writing erotica, Christa!

Although I'd love to read another chapter, just be aware that the maxim 'Always leave them wanting more' is worth remembering. Sometimes it's better to end a story on a high note rather than flogging it to death, as it were.

I look forward to reading more of your stories in the future!

Very nice first story. I'll look forward to seeing your next story.

Beautiful and sexy story

Really? Because you knocked it out of the fucking park! Can not wait for your sophomore effort. Five big stars!

Jedd

Thank you for sharing your first story with us. It was very enjoyable.

If this is your first story then you're an erotic savant.

I'm guessing you have submitted under different names, and the style is somewhat familiar.

If I am wrong; and I truly hope I am, then I hope this is just the first of many works of this quality.

Regardless, it was a very hot and compelling read.

Well done.

I see that you specify this is your first 'erotic' story so I'm guessing that you have written other things---it certainly reads that way. But whether this is your 'first' first or your 'erotic' first, you have produced a very praiseworthy piece of work. And with AnnaG as a mentor, you'll not go far wrong. First rate!

Please continue...I’m hoping for a MDLG relationship to develop. Little girl needs a Mommy!

Where will Rosa and Crista go from here

You are a fantastic writer , i love the story , wait for more developments.

Wow. Wonderfully put together. I can’t wait to see what you come up with next!

From some accomplished writers and those of us that are not.

Being that I enjoy the slow burn and romance it's nice to find a quality quick hitter. I hope to see much more of your writing. Thank You!

So Good! Hot all around! Flawless writing!

OMG, need more stars!

Rrrreally good storytelling.

Your writing was also stimulating In the way that it taught The ways of love between women . It is the frustration of mine, being a male, That perhaps I can never attain The pleasure and giving a pleasure That you Portray In the story. I can only hope To continue my learning. In the end Sexual Behavior It's not so neatly Framed By reference to gender.

Add all of the prior comments together and I agree ! 5x5 stars !!

Perfect. I want more!

I have fantasized many times about turning a straight lady . . . Although I am bi, it would be wonderful to rock a straight ladies world and leave her begging for more.

I am soooo wet! Thank you.

A wonderful story and so, so hot. This is an admirable first story and I look forward to your next submission with anticipation, whether it is a continuation of this one or a totally new storyline. You rock girl.

Unquestionably, a very nice "sensual & sexy" erotic lesbian story, which is excellent for your first posting.

Loved the character development and you descriptions were great! Cannot wait to read your next story.

What an incredibly hot story! It grabbed my attention from the beginning and kept me captivated (and soaked) the whole way through. Very well written for a first time story. There is no way you are straight as your profile states. Your descriptions were so hot, its like you have experienced this sort of thng yourself! lol

Keep up the good work and I hope to see more from you in the future

XOXOX

Susan

Oh, sweet story, lovely telling. And I have to thank Anna for turning me on to your story...

That was an amazing little story.

Five stars. Don't stop writing. You are very skilled.

A wonderful story. You are a skilled story teller. Please Please continue.

Fabulous! The sex action seems a teeny bit standard, like Rosa's studied the textbook of lesbian lovemaking and is ticking the boxes... But I suppose that's a bit unfair of me. The story is sensual, exciting and absolutely 5*

You are a wonderful writer! Quite a first story and quite a building energy. I will look for more from you and hope that you have a long and productive writing career.

you are a natural writer! keep going please, we want to read more. thank you

Very very hot!

Very well written, I love the way you slowly stoked the fires of their mutual desire and the climactic bedroom scene was really arousing.

The very best that I have read, it left me desperate to meet a Rosa

'Simply the best' The Story and the Lesbian writer. New but what a wonderful acquisition to the lesbian writing fraternity

An amazing story. My gf, Helen1899 pointed this out to me, and I so want to be her Rosa. You write so well xxx

It brought back memories of my GF the adorable Pixie and I. I cant be 100% sure which was the best.

My name's Crista lol... Story was great I like the way it was written

I like everyone else who read your first erotic story and commented loved it - so captivating, so well written, so praiseworthy. And you followed up with the longer, multi-chapter “Unlikely Love” which was an outstanding love story - great, real characters that we could touch/feel and an immersive storyline. So why comment again? Please consider, if you haven’t, continuing the Rosa - Christa saga — so much more to be shared between the two lovers. OMG.

Intense, lovely, wonderful. This has captured me so thoroughly I can't articulate very well and offer my apologies. You also have my gratitude for this beautiful work.

First seems to be the primary intimacy and effective one for both writer and straight girl enjoying what every woman should experience before moving on. If not for lesbians very few men would not have a chance with a woman. Thank you and keep writing.

Wow. this was a very hot interesting story loved it.

Perfect!

Love it.

Fabulous Amazing

Awesome

I feel we have spoke but however this is just beautiful

Well done

Absolutely loved it! Sexy, fun, sensual, awesome descriptions… well done!

Mmmmmm, loved it.

Please wright more. Excilent story telling.

hot story.....very believable...good details

Great story.

Beautiful story by a beautiful woman

Loved your story 5*

well written with the ring of truth!!

Christa," I replied, smiling and shaking her hand. "And thanks for the rescue, but just to be clear, I am straight."

Rosa bit her lip and giggled out loud, as if I had told some hilarious joke. "Well I am a lesbian, but I can respect that. Just wanna say you have no idea what you are missing."

So this interaction is okay?

Meaning if it was the other way around someone straight telling a lesbian "you don't know what you are missing"

That is flirting?

Really good story. Quite intense and erotic. But what else would one expect? Well written. Your proof reader needs to double check her work. S9808

So HOT. If this was only your first story, I can't wait to catch up with all the rest! Following you now.

Excellent story. So full of passion. Felt sorry it ended. You should write a follow up. “What happened next?”

What did her friend say? Rosa had her own house. What was her story?

So many options to develop.

Enjoyed the ride. Thanks.

More!! Needs romance

wonderful work Chritsa, I love it, you are really talented , thanks for sharing

What a marvelous origin of a story! It's a gem, beautifully designed and artfully crafted.

You have that exquisite writing ability

You have that exquisite writing ability to turn us on Instantly, slow delicious build up, delicious derails, ongoing erotic moments, i got very hard right away, getting into the slow seductive mind melting moments, i love the wetness, talking about tasting, so hot, I love kissing, sniffing and tasting the wetness in the panties...Heaven!!

Loved them...

What Carly will do is to flask a mile wide smile once Rosa shakes her head with a beaming smile as she slowly pushes along her conquest Christa while holding her hands behind her back to take her home where ownership will be settled once and for all over the weekend.

Christa will be fully owned by Rosa and Carly will get the news from Cheshire cat Rosa at the office.

Great story. Is there more? What happened next?