All Comments on 'Twelve Realms Ch. 16-17'

by BumbleCat

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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Good Fucking job

I mean... jesus... just good fucking job

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Ending felt rushed

16 chapter build up with incredible detail & flashbacks to their time as children. All finished and wrapped up in a page and a half. Feels kind of like you got tired of writing it. Kudos for finishing anyway and giving us all closure on a great story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Short & sweet; a great story! Thank you for sharing this wonderful tale with us!

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Finally writing after only thinking about it.

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