by Evil Alpaca
This is one of the hottest series I've ever read, specially since I'm engaged to a hottie with pink hair!
...That was disgusting. You're my favorite author, but that.. Ugh. I liked it until you brought the men into it. I usually don't rate, but I really wanted to comment on this. 00/100. I'll keep reading it, see if it gets better, but it feels like you turned their relationship into 'whore' and 'pimp', and it completely turned me off.
In my mind Jeremy sucumed to his urges a little too quickly. That was an uncomfortable chapter for me.
This was coming. You're in my top 3 authors here but this killed the entire series for me. In my eyes this is just such a massive violation of trust. A domina should know better than to even ask this of her love. I could easily accept the women since they're supposed to be lesbians but this... What a let down. I have to follow my conscience here.. 0/10