All Comments on 'Twenty Years to Life Ch. 03'

by Evil Alpaca

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dustmansdustmansalmost 19 years ago
Great set

This is one of the hottest series I've ever read, specially since I'm engaged to a hottie with pink hair!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Lesbian my ass

...That was disgusting. You're my favorite author, but that.. Ugh. I liked it until you brought the men into it. I usually don't rate, but I really wanted to comment on this. 00/100. I'll keep reading it, see if it gets better, but it feels like you turned their relationship into 'whore' and 'pimp', and it completely turned me off.

Eric_ShiftEric_Shiftalmost 15 years ago
A little to much bondage

In my mind Jeremy sucumed to his urges a little too quickly. That was an uncomfortable chapter for me.

gr3ywindgr3ywindover 9 years ago
Had an eerie feeling

This was coming. You're in my top 3 authors here but this killed the entire series for me. In my eyes this is just such a massive violation of trust. A domina should know better than to even ask this of her love. I could easily accept the women since they're supposed to be lesbians but this... What a let down. I have to follow my conscience here.. 0/10

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