All Comments on 'Twilight on Dreamworld'

owsum dued i loved it!

Beautiful. By raw I guess I mean natural. None of the characters seemed overly perfect, and their flaws, for instance in Seth and Anubis, made the story so much the more believable. Very well written. This style of story is my favorite: having pieces of yourself show you things your conscious self likes to bury. Would I too could learn to be unashamed. Thought for power. Thank you. Respectfully Cass.

I absolutly adore this story. I find that the characters Jasper creates are realistic as far as created characters go, and the plot was unique and touching. The ending was very cute. You have a talent.

As said I thought this was a very interesting story... the concept was really original, which is something I don't see much of. To a daydream like myself it's wonderful to see that his characters are alive and are allowed to stay alive. It's a well written story and I think I'll enjoy reading more of your work.

Love it. It matched a dream I had in my youth. Thank you for the memories.