by oggbashan
A very nice story. I liked the pace of the story and the characters. I liked the way you brought them together and how they joined. Thanks for your time and imagination.
There is a wonderful balance of expectation and real life. I thoroughly enjoying reading it.
I really enjoyed this and the rather happy ending. I hope there is more. Adequate character development and excellent story coupled with good writing mechanics always leaves me wondering what happens next and wanting more. Don't take my review lightly, I made my living for over 25 years as a professional scientific writer.