All Comments on 'Twin Flames Pt. 01'

by thickbutterfly

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

WHAT THE FUCK IS GOING ON HERE!!!!! This is the strangest story I've ever read, and yet I'm drawn in and can't stop reading it. But OMG, what a bunch of WACADOODLES, starting with Adam's father. It's certainly obvious why the mother left, and the brothers went to college in the East. And even Adam doesn't seem like he's wrapped too tight. I think he'll find out that instead of being in a monastery, he's actually in an insane asylum where the inmates have taken over. For imagination alone, this is worth *****s, and I'm looking forward to finding out what happens next amid all this craziness. MLF

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

I need more. This was very intriguing

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Love this!!

dnsontndnsontnalmost 2 years ago

I’ll echo ‘intriguing’. You’ve already captured my attention before this post, thickbutterfly, so I’m all in for the ride. Sent to a monastery after his father met a man in a bar. And a twin flame? Let’s see where this leads.

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