All Comments on 'Twin Seduction Ch. 01'

Another noob writes a flopper. 36 DD chest? Why do you new writers have to write fictional fiction? Keep it real, fer crissakes.

Nice twist with the Step-mother bitch.

Please keep writing!

I enjoyed it Loki. Give us more. I think you could develop this into a nice sibling love story.

This is a great story! Please hurry with more!

What more could some readers ask for

really enjoyed the story as far as it went.

would really like to see how the story unfolds.

please write more.

bad writing and if she was really 36DD,27,24 then she was pretty fat the waist is supposed to be smaller than the hips it should have been 36,24,27 also next time leave the monster tits out nothing wrong with a normal B or C cup and the girl doesn't end up with major back problems later in life

why would he even think about it all he had to do is get a tape of the stepmom asking him to do it then play it for his dad or just tell his sister the truth and let her decide for her self total waste of time

This plot didn't work at all, and made the whole story weird and artificial.