All Comments on 'Twin Sisters Need to be Bred'

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DunkirkDunkirkover 2 years ago

The family that fucks together stays together.

WhitewaterbumWhitewaterbumover 2 years ago

Another excellent sorry. Hoping for a second chapter. Several unanswered points. How many many children did first breeding fathers produce? Did the girls only attempt to creed on their birthdays? At a minimum there would be previously 8 more breed days till you picked up story again. With two sets of twins and maximum of 7 individual children by each sister for a total of 18 That’s a big family. I know it’s a fantasy good job

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Just a couple minor spelling mistakes It's Marine Corps. At least you didn't spell it "Core" as I have seen elsewhere. Never heard of a hymen being close to the entrance to a vagina, it's a little way inside.

sp9983sp9983over 2 years ago

Thou need a thesaurus, you keep using the same words and phrases repeatedly.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I’m kinda surprised someone wrote about the hymen in that way in 2021. A bit disappointing if I’m being honest. I, personally, find it to be a major turnoff because it’s archaic science that has no holding in the world whatsoever. The rest was good though. But goodness the hymen? A grown woman hardly ever has that thing still intact! It can tear at a young age just by walking…. there would also be no pain to “rip” through one seeing as how women have no clue as to when theirs tore.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

This is a story and I like reading about daddy's big cock shooting his seed and knocking her up or breeding her. I liked the description of daddy's broad shoulders and hairy chest. I could envision him on top of his little girl and his cock having discharged his virile seed and his broad hairy chest against her young breasts. A bull having done her "good".

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I have bread my sister. Nothing is better than you Children having siblings as their parents!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Once again, you left us hanging you did this in the Incestuous Harem's Passion series and at least one other series. You obviously love to tease. I HATE that!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Remember that in real life only go pussy to ass not ass to pussy. Don't want an infection

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I was a bit turned off by the ass to snatch without clean up and I kind of wish Dad just watched instead of joining. The end with their sons really kind of ruined things. Would have been nicer to have them encouraging their daughters as the others sons were about to breed them

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I would another part for it

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

It is really nasty and irresponsible to go ass to pussy due to possible infection. You can't be that brainless. Be responsible no matter how horny you get.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Soooo hot and the ending just fucking sealed thr deal 😩

AnonymousAnonymous19 days ago

I'm so dumb and stupid for cock I'm a sad caricature of a human being because my author has no soul.

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Erotic author been writing since 2013. I've had two stories blocked by literotica for being written by AI, Bimbo App Santa's Naughty Gift 3 & Mommy's Incubus Son Comes of Age 14. That one was rejected 4 times despite my protests. Talked to site admin and she just sent me a lin...