All Comments on 'Twin Times - Their Mum's Dilemma'

by Rustyoznail

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HighpikeHighpikeover 4 years ago
This is set up for a sequel

So I do hope you oblige. Well done and thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Great opening

Need a part two, soon. Love it so far

goducks111goducks111over 4 years ago
great tease

well written, clever. hopefully part 2 is on the way!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Hope to see more.

That was pretty great, would love to see a sequel.

Maybe with a little anal and DP?

max052max052over 4 years ago
Very well done ...

The sex was great and so was the story. Can't wait for more. 5 stars and fave story.

Regards; max052

ChloeTzangChloeTzangover 4 years ago
Trixie says it was really really good

.... and she enjoyed herself a lot. The tequila was good too, and if you’d like to come to her next wedding....😂

mcfbridgemcfbridgeover 4 years ago
Really well written

Great story. The build up is as believable as an incest story can be. The twins are fascinating characters.

UAlbanyGirl518UAlbanyGirl518over 4 years ago
Good story

Good story...but you do know that identical twins are always the same gender right?

gpetagpetaover 4 years ago
very good plot and sex

a very arousing scenery with good sex description but without often used hardcore

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

UAlbanyGirl518 I didn't see the word "identical" anywhere in the story. Lots of talk about them looking/acting similar, but nothing about them being identical twins. For this fiction, I'd say they're likely fraternal twins.

arsekoarsekoover 4 years ago
Turning a corner

Great story. Nice premise and well executed.

Erotic, quite sensual and without 'hard porn' crudity.

Well done and looking forward to more chapters in a series

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Batshit insane....

In a fucking hilarious waaay!!!!! Geeeez i never thought i'd have a good laugh from this website. Poor Carol

LaGazzaLadraLaGazzaLadraover 4 years ago

@Anonymous: I didn't see the word "identical" anywhere in the story.'

Then you didn't read very well, because it's there.

Anyway, the story was funny and it's refreshing to see a bushwacker, I mean Aussie, here. Budgie smugglers? Aussie slang is just hilarious.

On a content note, personally I'm not too keen on involving parents, but to each his own.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Great Start

Looking forward to More about these three.

LenaptLenaptabout 4 years ago
This need a Sequel

Nice story but it needs a Sequel where the Mom Carol may join her twins too mmm

Aunt Helena

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Seriously

If ever a story needed a sequel, this is it. Never in the history of stories requiring sequels has there been a more deserving candidate. How do you think this story feels, being abandoned by it's own creator? Revolutions have started over less! Help this poor orphaned story fulfill it's destiny. Finish it.

Wildbill1964Wildbill1964over 1 year ago

Umm, damn it, that train derailed before it got a good head of steam. Can we ALL say it at once? "Finish The Damn Story"!.... And I'll even say "Please" 5/5 Thank you.

ddmc1701ddmc1701about 1 year ago

Please write more let’s see if he can win the challenge. 5 so far

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