All Comments on 'Twin Troubles Pt. 02 - The Next Date'

Very fun story with a good plot and entertaining characters. Well done. Looking forward to their next adventures. Cheers

Pretty good story. Love the way the girls are so close. My only problem with this story is the name Duella? (LOL) Pappasleaze!

Fun storyline — interesting characters, humor, sister “love” and more. Thanks for putting smile on my face.

Part One was better.

The potential incest is a turn off.

Hmmm, I Love Black Pussy,,, Yes!

Hallo Sexy Bree!

Daaaaaayyyyyummmmm girl your stories are so smokin hot they should have a warning... "Careful Read At Own Risk"... Danger Of Multiple Orgasms!!

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Thank-you... 10-Stars and 10-Yummy Orgasms!

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(From Anonymous: Part One was better. The potential incest is a turn off.) _ My answer to our anonymous readers opinion!... NO. NO. NO. NO. I disagree!... Both Parts 01 and 02, are Brilliantly Written, Hot and Sexy!... The only turn off is it was such a FUN story, I wanted more!

We can't wait to read parts 03 and 04,,,yes!

The Black Queen and Gay Kat.

That story was really good! I'm looking forward to the next chapter where the sisters get together, either in a threesome or just the two of them.

Another no vote for incest. Yucky note to end on.

Hope for more.....

Beautiful, definitely hope to hear more about them. Great read

I would love to award a 5. I'm sorely tempted. But I can't and rather than downgrade it to a 4, I'm abstaining from the voting.

As with the first of this series, it is a brilliant and engaging story. Sadly, though, the execution leaves much to be desired. In addition to the suggestion I made i/c/w Part 01, you need a good and faithful editor to help with proofreading. In your future writings, please take to heart my comment about using correctly the transitive "lay" and "raise" and the intransitive "lie" and "rise."

Thankfully no hurricane broke over the twins and so both could experience Ashley at its best ..... And getting tongue entranced in a club might be not too bad at all or?!

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