All Comments on 'Twins'

It was just all around great, I liked that everyone fucked everyone else, all bisexual. I love that the twins are identical and no one can tell anyone else apart really. Sequal? Please?

I loved it. The characterization wasn't too far off but I wish you had worked with it a little more. I also thought it was great that everybody had sex with everybody. It's a great way to teach tolerance of other people's differences, actually. I loved the story, in fact, right up to the end. But that's where it fell flat for me. It just kind of ended. It left me feeling, "OK, so THEN what?"

Otherwise, other than the lengthiness (which you, yourself mentioned in your profile, "TryAnything,") I loved this story!

i have a twin, but he is nothing like that, although i am...poor me ;( oh wel, tryanythig i love your work and this is my new favorite, only topped bu "cheerleader" and "service" i love the bisexuality theme, as i am bisexula and the descriptions were gread sequal !! please !!

the story started out great but i didn't like the bar scene or when they went to the cabin to unrealistic for me you should have stopped before the cabin

This was a great read.. I usually don't go for stories this long.. The only turn off was the gang bang in the bar.. That could have been left out....

not even neraly as good as ur other works i have read. very disappointed that u could write such shit.

I had read this a while ago and decided to read again. Still thaouhgt that it was hot. I would agree that the bar scene did not really fit. YOur profile indicates that you are going to be writing again. Looking forward to the new material.

03//22/08

great read but it was hard to remember the characters names and i kept getting confused who was doing what. i also felt a lack of discription of what the people looked like. as far as the bar scene it could have done with out them fucking the whole bar, or the video tape. that went too far.

I hated the ending.

This was just disgusting shit.

It's so far from reality I felt like I was reading a story from mars or something.

/: Sorry.

Man the rest of you are squares. its a freeking story enjoy it. I thought that this was just as amazing as all of your other stories that I've read and so far you are my favorite auther on this site. keep writting.

3/13/2009 Now, that is what "loving family" is all about. I have read some of your previous postings, but I think you have reached your peak with this one.

Please don't wait as long to send another story.

So wat if its not realistic. its a story it doesnt have to b. this was so hot. the only thing i can recomed is that even though they r twins dnt make their names so much alike it can get confusing. aside from that the story was great. i was so wet through the whole fucking thing. it was amazing!!!

At first I wasn't sure about reading an incest story but this one just blew me and my wife away. This is without a doubt one of the best and most erotic stories I have ever read so if your reading this and not sure about incest, trust me and read this story as you will completely forget the incest and get deeply involved in the story!!!! You must read it!!!!!!!

The writing was great but I did not like the male to male contact, I think it took alot from the beginning of the story.

Really enjoyed all the explorations ... how things progressed tentatively. I loved the reluctance and the switch from "gross" to "lust" ... esp the ass-sucking! Only the stereotypes of the "giant cocks" was a drag. I would have preferred fathers and sons to be close to the same size to make it more intimate. A really fun read. Thanks!

What a story. Who's your daddy, who's your mommy, who gives a fuck lets just fuck.

umm.....

If the brothers are almost 19 and the sisters are younger by a year and a half.......

This story is very heavy with shit fucking, which is more to the liking of homosexual gays, than it is to heterosexual natural penis/cock to vagina/pussy fucking!! Yet, the 'Tags For This Story' (to the right) does not mention shit (anal) fucking at all.

A another great story, well done

I did not care for the gang bang in the bar; felt that was entirely unnecessary. In addition, there were huge chunks of text on Page 4 which I think could've been due to formatting issues. Those were really hard on the eyes! Other than those, good story but not one of your best.

I,too,had a bit of a problem with the stated current ages of the mother vs that of the kids vs Ann's at impregnation vs this sites stated policy re sexual active characters ages in posted stories. The math seems fuzzy at best.

Quite a good erotic story. Totally awesome except for the part of Alice and Ann fucking the school team and the bikers. It would have being best if it was just Jim and John.

.......the end seemed a bit hurried and we still don't know what happened to the younger twins. Did they stay together and live as husband and wife and have their own kids, or what ?

This needs a sequel to wrap up the loose ends.

But otherwise, it was very enjoyable !

Loved the slow build up, not too keen with the gay male aspect, but everything else was great !

Sorry, ALL the appeal of this story was GONE when the 2 sisters did the biker bar fuck, and Ann coerced the boys to go at each other, then get butt-fucked. Those things RUINED the whole story. ONE STAR, because it's not possible to give A HALF STAR.

Ann & Alice continued to lbe with James & John and cuckoled them with the football team. Super Sluts and total immoral.

Fucking the bikers dropped be to a zero.

Thanks for writing this fantasy story. I am unsure why some comments are so negative over your efforts. It’s just a story folks! Share your experiences if you want reality.

You've constructed a pornotopia on par with The Romance of Lust. Love that it's bisexual, and that everybody got to play with everyone else. Five stars, sir!

The brothers doing each other was a big turn off. I quit reading at that point.

but this story got too repetitious. Wake up, fuck. Fuck, brunch. Fuck, lunch. Fuck, afternoon snack. Fuck, dinner. Fuck, milk and cookies before bedtime. Fall asleep. (Change "fuck" to "suck" at your whim.) And yes, I don't get off on two guys going at it, either, so like the previous Anon, I skipped over those parts of the story.

But had I not been tired, I think I would have found this story to be very good. The story was consistent, well written, technically good, and I don't remember any missing or wrong words, errors other authors make because they rely on autocomplete without making sure the right thing was done. Thank you!

Great story, aside from the bikers that made me lose a lot of interest. That was completely out of place, didn’t match the rest of the story, had no relevancy to the story, and made the moms look like cheating sluts.

Great Story.

Guess the biker bar scene was just to show Ann and Alice still "had it" and used to take on the entire football team.

If I could give a 4.75, I would because the boys got short changed in a couple ways. When they were doing their sisters' asses, mom should have gotten a dildo and did their asses. Or could have had sisters do the boys' asses. Next if boys' father/ uncle were really that much bigger, would have thought mom /aunt would have had the boys prepped better, like maybe had 2 (or 3) fingers inserted in their asses before popping their cherries. And some better lube!

And like others, feel the ending came too abruptly. Could definitely have a sequel, college days?

I would have been happier without the biker bar, but all-in-all, a 3.25 stroker.

Fabulous full on super fuck fest with identical twin mothers and daughters and sons. Omg what would I not give to be part of a group like this, fingering, sucking and fucking three cunts at the same time. Taking the virginity of two hotter than hot 18 year olds while eating their mother. A total orgy of hot horny cunts. I adore cunt in every way possible, love watching girls and women sixty nine and fucking the one on top as soon as they both cream their brains out. Cunt lapping sex maniac Lanc’s UK.

I would love to be there and lick up all the mess

HOT! Thank you.

I thought this was a really good story until the last two pages then it went to shit.

Many have tried to write similar stories like this, but this was the best I've encountered.

Nicely done... and now you and this story are in my favorites bin. Welcome aboard.

Really amazing story except for the biker bar part. That felt like rape and was not needed.

drop the biker bar, and add part 2 of turbo twins family fun!