All Comments on 'Twins Fuck on a Hot Summer Day Pt. 02'

If you want a bitter sweet ending, you could read the last couple pages of Cousin Lacey for ideas.

@Anon

There's an additional part, I just forgot to post it on this site and I haven't gotten to it. Thankfully, I'm not going anywhere with this. I have zero interest in continuing this story past the final part, since writing stories that are only about sex is really boring, and writing the final part was just so I could say I finished this thing than it was any form of entertainment for myself. It's basically just more sex. Honestly, I've just been turned off of writing since, lol. I'd rather never write again than write another paragraph about these two people. I'll probably post it later. If anyone's interested and impatient, you can see the final part on any of my other platforms (ao3, reddit, henfoundry), it's the chapter about anal sex. It's better than this chapter, I think.

Okay, I uploaded the final part to this site too. It'll be on whenever the admins okay it.

Agree with your own comment - pure sex without the relationship connection is boring. I'm giving you 4* as much for effort rather than content. Spread your literary wings more, you could have taken this somewhere other than where you led us...

Appreciate it! I will gladly spread my wings, and will forever hope that I never write something like this again.