All Comments on 'Twins of Love'

Great story, looking forward to more.

Definitely want to see more of this. Also kinda want to see the aftermath with James and Kerry

the story is ok, can you write a story about a brother and sister becoming pornstars incest?

YES!!!! The next chapter please. Hopefully they don't get caught for a while.

I love this story! Hopefully it will be a part 2. Disregard the haters especially the anonymous ones! Lol

The James thing ruined it for me. The weird ass manipulation was a boner killer.

We will need another chapter to see how things turn out for Elle and Michael! pretty good so far, an editor / proofreader would be a good decision.

I dont know how many times I layed in bed with my brothers big cock in my slutty pussyfull of his cum,we fucked every chance we had mom and dad would leave,id get nude go in his room and sit on his bwc till he filled me again with hot incest cum

Fuck the whore she needs it. He needs to take her ass too!!

I loved it ❤️

Good. Mom knows. What is she going to do about it?

Mom and dad know, and dad certainly doesn't seem to mind... As long as Ellie stays with only Michael, I'd love to see more stories...

It'd be nice to see Michael be a one-woman man for his sister, but how would that go over with everyone else that knows them?

Why did you stop there? It was getting really good.

MORE NEEDED!!!!!!

Fuck I need another part. This got me so wet.

Would be great if this stayed their secret forever. They can have the thrill of sneaking around in the house, on family vacations, holidays, visit each other at college, even as they get older and can’t spend as much time with each other, it just become more special and intimate when they have their dates.

Can we do something about James and Kerry? That manipulative boy who’s always so pleased with himself. What was his fascination with Michael knowing what his sister was like in bed?!

I’d like Michael to end up realizing that James not only had a longtime crush on him but becomes submissive whenever Michael becomes dominant. Their relationship can then develop in a whole new direction, NOT as punishment to James, mind you, but as the unfolding of something neither of them knew they wanted or needed. The twins can punish him specifically for making that tape and for cheating with Kerry, but it would be nice if that was within a proper, caring Daddy relationship with Michael. Michael should be a such a good Dom / Daddy to both his sister and James that they become his lifelong (secret?) partners, sharing a house or always living near each other even as they marry other people and have kids.

Kerry is a silly girl, seems very naive. Unsure what I’d do with her. The lesbian category does nothing for me so I wouldn’t want her to be in with her best friend. Unless she was a little (an older one, no regression to infancy or toddler) that James ends up claiming and caring for? That way the four of them stay intertwined.

But the ending was lacking definitely needs another chapter or two