All Comments on 'Twisted Fairy Tale - Cinderella'

by icey_hearted

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Too fast paced but..

Personally I think if you would have made this a longer story anf put more into the detail and how the story unfolds, it would be Amazing.

It's alright how it is, I like the theme behind it, but i really wish you would have put more into it.

jenorma2012jenorma2012almost 6 years ago
it was good

but to me it seemed you rushed through the story, and it could have been a little longer but still a good story

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