All Comments on 'Two Bi-Curious Couples Meet Ch. 05'

I got off on the first page

loved it all.

I really enjoyed your stories, including Dave/Dawn. They are really well written with a great balance of dripping details and pace. I hope you are still writing (and posting?). Thanks for sharing!

WHAT HAPPENED? TOYS, REMOTE CONTROLS? You left us hanging... and if they were going out, how did the guys keep the toys in? wouldn't butt plugs have been a better choice? I hope there is more chapters to come.