All Comments on 'Two Cellos'

Tabernac! Strong character development. Excellent back stories. Believable throughout. Tres bon! Merci.

very well done and enjoyable. I did wonder about the daughter after the split of her parents

Thanks, guys. As always, the comments are appreciated considering the time & effort that goes into every story.

@clearcreek, yes, I was toying with making Natasha a more major character right up to the end. But considering the somewhat public nature her dad's betrayal could have taken, I decided to spare her and just let it be assumed her parents got joint custody in a typical divorce.

After all, Imaani & Quinn were mainly interested in being happy together over blowing things up for Clayton. The best revenge, I say. :)

If the story had been written entirely in English I would've rated 5 stars instead of 2.

Ienjoyerotica, imagine having written zero stories but being so petty and arrogant that you rate an actual writer 2 stars for a nuanced story... because theyre bilingual? 5 stars from me, author.

Great plot! Thoroughly enjoyable!

5 stars solid!

IEnjoyErotica said, "I would've rated 5 stars instead of 2." Actually buddy, you rate zero stars, not 2. Because if you meant rating the story, you would have written "I would've rated it 5 stars," like anyone who knows English.

Since I am from Western Canada, I only have some spotty high school French but I did appreciate the francais in your story. Keep up the good work!