by P_Anderer
Thoroughly enjoyed your stories today and it is nice to read or arses instaid of asses.
Just on negative. You use laying instead of lying and laid instead of lay. Hope you can cure that in future tales. It kind of brings me to a halt when I read of her laying there - or is that laying eggs. Or that she laid there - what did she lay?
got me so fucking wet lol. now I want a threesome but my virgin self just laughs at me lmao bye
Good story. Could use more details and less abrupt ending. Please keep writing.
Good story. Very erotic. I like a little more back story maybe some teasing or incidental contact. A few grammatical errors but overall 5 stars. Good job!
A very nice lead up to an extraordinary afternoon. Hazel was ripe for the picking that afternoon. No husband for two weeks and a controlling one as well. Not sure who had more pleasure, the two guys or her. I'll read the rest of your stories.