All Comments on 'From Swapping to Hotwife Ch. 01'

Spelling was a distraction.

This would have been better for me if the dialogue early on had been expand somewhat. I hope you will continue with this and other tales under this pen name.

Tks.

Please explain about this cock that is 4 to 5 inches thick? Diameter? Circumference? Imagination?

R

Poor spelling and grammar are too distracting.

Great story please keep writing

I couldn't finish reading this because I was so distracted by all the misspelling. it's not swop and swopping. It's swap and swapping.

Okay, the editing here leaves something to be desired. Mistakes in grammar, punctuation, spelling and improper word usage would get you a low grade in English composition. That said, it was one fine erotic story and presented in an original fashion, which is a rarity here. Enjoyed the reading, and the hot sex made me forget all about the poor editing. Gave it five stars, definitely worth it for effort and originality. Keep up the good work!

I enjoyed it too much to notice any grammar issues!

Character development (?) was very one-sided :)

Keep writing please

I loved it.Was so aroused reading it. Would love to read a sequel.

Two married couples...Entering the swap world, all in agreement...However the wife describing it seemed a little to selfish...But I can be wrong...Let's see what happen next...3* for now

Hope they enjoy the ride. Kind of hard to feel good about this, since most of these trips end up a wreck for one or more individuals. Once you have mutually agreed to end your marriage vows, is it still a marriage? Guess they will find out.

Being in the same room with your loved one enjoying another while watching is such a turn on. Thank you for igniting fond memories and causing a wetness that needs addressing... :-)

But 5 inches thick, like 1 1/2 beer cans, huh.

Very erotic...just like I like them. Next time give us a realistic dick size though. 5* anyway. This story is just what we need more of in the LW category. Wives enjoying sex with other men with their husbands consent and participation without any gay crap.

Nice story. A simple spell check would help it be even better.

As others noted, I think when you said 4-5'' thick you mean 4-5'' around.

Spelling? Grammar? Punctuation? I visit this site for the stories not to criticise the ability of the author or their lack of command of English Grammar. 5*