All Comments on 'Two for One Ch. 06'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
More cum please

Keep it up just like in your stories, maybe add another female like a niece would be exciting!!!

TavernerTavernerover 8 years ago
Great work

Just love the whole series. Don't listen to the commenters who criticised you for taking the story where you have gone, (i.e. pregnancy, anal sex etc). It's your story and as far as I'm concerned, you're doing great.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

Really? You had a great story going and then one of them gets pregnant? Ruined it for me...won't even go to the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
nice

STOP THE MADNESS AND CONTINUE THE STORY

cowboynickcowboynickalmost 13 years ago
Sweeeeettttt......

I'm really enjoying this story for a number of reasons.... When you got it you got it...

shagster56shagster56about 15 years ago
please continue

very exciting series, please continue. You've opened up a whole new storyline....not that the 5 prior were boring by any means.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Good but.

For my reading pleasure, not enough kissing of his sister, and he hasn't had her ass yet. Please write more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Not Finished

Story was not finished.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Excellent series

I enjoyed each installment. Hope you will continue the story line.

Mr Wild willyMr Wild willyalmost 19 years ago
Continue Please!

this is a good story so far and I want to see hm knock up his sister too. then Kelly can move out with her baby and he and sister can stay together with their child since you already telegraphed their break up.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Two for One Ch.6

Enjoyed the whole story so far, please write more chapters.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
great erotica

great stories.. one mistake already pointed outabout Sandra and Kelly breaking up but hopefully it will be remedied .. the stories were very erotic and keep me "up" the entire time... waiting anxiously for the next one

BrettJBrettJalmost 19 years ago
The heat of the series

I think the story merits continuation, although one slight mistake might have been telegraphing that Kelly & the sister broke up. Perhaps that could be fixed in the "present" day? I'd love to see how it turns out though, keep up the good work!

Traveller_1955Traveller_1955almost 19 years ago
More, More, More!!!!!!!

Great fun. Well written. Lot's of imagination. Looking forward to the next chapters.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Please, could we have some more?

I'm enjoying the heck out of this wish-fulfillment masterpiece. Please, do give us another chapter or three.

Is Rachel fertile?

Does Sandra really want to have a child, as well?

Will our hero marry Kelly (or Rachel), just to make things more "respectable"?

And... what about Naomi?

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