All Comments on 'Two Friends in Need Ch. 01'

I SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOo hope for more!!!!!!

Excellent story and just how I believe it should be. A little care of a slave goes a long way.

and loved it...i was friends with my Master for a while before we took things to the next level and we were so in tune because of it...knowing each other so personally i believe helped cement a stronger link much quicker...i love this story and i will continue to read on. respectfully a fan in Texas

the way to play the game!!

Kudos!!!!!!!!

one of the best stories I've read so far... and a reflectance of a few things I experienced myself with a wonderful woman...

Strangecaress

MasterBeau:

Thank you for a very well done story. I enjoyed it imensely - though I did notice a few typos. The dialog was well done; the couple were quite realistic. Good work!

I have never experienced being owned have often fantasized about it - your story has made me want to take it from the level of fantasy to reality.

I have been trying to get my husband to possess me like that for years. I think it is time to broach the subject again. Thank you so much for a truly exciting read.

That was excellant and very well done. Please continue your excellant writing. Thank you!!!

Quite a hot story; unfortunately the large number of typos or misspellings distracted me from the hawtness many times. Maybe get a copyeditor next time?

To be submissive is a fantasy of mine. I could only hope it would be executed as well as by the master in your story.

I'n new to BDSM and my partner would like to submit to me. This story gave me terrific insight into the mindset of both the D and s components of BDSM.

A great pleasure to read, thank you for sharing.

Thank you for posting made me so wet and lead to some very enjoyable orgasms

Thanks!

I find the grammatical and spelling errors appalling, and the use of incorrect or simply wrong words unacceptable. The characters, plot and action are all fine, but the lack of editing left me cold.