by Cleardiamond
The rimming, the deep-throating, the creampie eating, the kiss at the end. Fabulous.
great story! How wonderful having two fantasies realized at the same time. I look forward to reading more.
Great story. The writer's enjoyment of the fantasy comes through so clearly - makes it very horny to read. Well written too - looking forward to more!
Well written. The flow and use of language is very good. The pace of the narrative is perfect and the description of the sex is fabulous-very hot, extremely sensual and very arousing.
Really good.
Very nicely done hope to see more of your writing. Very erotic and I too love your picture ayou looh absolutly delicious. V
Excellent command of detail - I felt like I was there in the room!