All Comments on 'Two Girls Nikkie and Mel'

I love these stories written by women about women. You are so hot.

It is hot to watch you make love.

Like Zoolicious I like lesbian stories and have written a few. I love the story and it had the, I think, intended effect on me between my legs. I was clutching and stroking myself as the story neared them climaxing. I had to stop reading and put my tablet down for a minute before I came so my other hand could grab one of my arse cheeks ahd play with the crown jewels whilst I erupted all over myself.

I loved how you led up slowly to the sex part and how the description of your bodies created images of you in my mind. A five star story if there ever was one.

XOX Swriter

I love reading stories that women have wrote cuz men are disgusting and only do it to fetishize my sexuality (and they do such a poor job writing, honestly.) They give me the creeps... Your story was well written, one of my favs.

Means less women in the world to spoil mens lives. Paul and John have had a lucky escape, go girls.

Northern lasses are great! I really enjoyed your sexy tale, thank you. Personally, I think Nikkie and Mel do get together again (and again) so perhaps there’s another story to be told :-)