All Comments on 'Two Horny Ch. 02'

As stated this is really progressing nicely. For some reason I have a feeling that the parents do more than just socialise with the Mercers, but that is a whole other story. The build-up to the bothers tinkering was convincing, sisters lust was fun and moms concern was somewhat surprising.

Love the rules they set, so In spirit with them and your mention of people participating increasing, I have a few suggestion of my own:

- keep the focus of play in the family but broaden on that, like mom and dad getting a share of the fun with the kids;

- that Amy girl might be just what the brother needs but her mom seems to be an available piece of ass as well;

- as sister said no telling friends but they could tell each other of their conquers outside of home;

- foremost do not expand the circle too much as that could backfire painfully.

Hope to see next instalment soon!

Story went backwards,Goes From Fucking sister! to out of blue being told to go over to parents friends to clean pool,at very least could of should of got that story concluded ended way to quick

Can't wait to see how the next chapter unfolds since you set the stage for a few different situations to develop. :-)

yeah im not feeling the dad entering into any of this with his daughter. i really hope you stop with that plot line.

The story line is good but Andrew and his sister are a HOT situation that needs to be expanded on and if Alice is a knockout she could be

a challenger vs. his sister. An interesting idea But even better is Andrew and his Mom getting together, maybe that's why she is so bossy and curt - she is sexually frustrated and needs relief that her husband cannot take care of. Please more chapters - thanks !!

Please drop the dad daughter plot. It completely ruins it. If I wanted a father/daughter story I'd go to that section. Thus is bri/sis keep it that way.

I enjoyed it but you could go to make longer I think the dad thing is a good twist, however makes the next chapter longer won't you?

Drop the dad story. No one is here for that and it's gross compared to bro/sis

lol i would have told my mum No straight away xD. I do hope they develope feelings for each other thou anr maybe we can have a incest marriage or love thing?

Can’t wait to see what treats Amy might have for him.

Maybe e by er. Mrs Mercer.

A waste of time....