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"Stop before someone comes out to find us fucking in the dirt." Dylan grabbed his bags and began walking toward the house. Logan called after him "I don't want to hide us tonight. It would only be from her and I want to be honest about who we are from the start."
Dylan stopped cold and he tried to process what Logan had said. He turned to the other man and saw only truth and humility.
"What if you could have her, but not both of us? What if she doesn't understand or want poly?" Logan was a little shocked, but maybe this was part of the growing distance between Dylan and himself. Logan took a step toward Dylan but stopped when he sensed how tensely the man stood waiting for answers to his questions.
"She can have both or neither. We are a package. If she doesn't understand or want two men, then she isn't the perfect fit I've painted her out to be." Sadness filled his eyes, mind, and voice as he admitted "That's a mistake I made with Grace that I won't repeat. Our third will need to know and want all of us."
Dylan nodded. "Thank you." Logan nodded back and grabbed his bags. They headed into the house, dropping the bags off in the kitchen.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousabout 1 year agoOkay, so this was extremely well written. But I'm interested in F F M polyamory and not a fan of mmf. With that caveat established, I'm going to post the following observations anonymously, which is far, far, far outside of the norm for me.
In spite of the fact that I'm turned off by two men being sexual with each other, I did read the entire thing because it had an actual story and plot like you could find in a non-erotic novel. Other than numerous errors of various types, it was very well done. The author's bio has no information in it, but this "feels" like it was penned by a female. I won't wager money on it because I have been wrong before, but when you read as much as I do, you get subconscious clues about the author based on how they describe the setting of the story and where it takes place. This one just feels feminine inspired is all that I'm saying.
The author obviously intended to have a series because the title clearly stated "Part One". However there are several problems clearly evident. As ironic as it is, I finished reading this on May 6, 2023 and it was published on May 6, 2017. This is the ONE AND ONLY submission from this author and it's exactly 6 years old to the day. So to everyone out there who is looking for this story to continue, I hate to break it to you but it is NOT going to happen. If part 2 was ever ready to share with the readers, it would have been published 5 1/2 years ago or more. Especially when you're dropping installments of 7000 to 9000 words like this one was.
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That's all she wrote, folks! (Forgive the pun)
Better luck next time. 1/5
Anonymousabout 7 years agoThis is more than sex. It's a great story about people and love. I loved it and look forward to your updates!
