All Comments on 'Two Hundred Dollars Ch. 02'

Thoroughly enjoyable. A well-written follow up. Looking forward to see where this will go.

To much more extreme levels. How far will she go???? Chris

This story could go in so many interesting directions. Please continue!

I really enjoyed the superior craft of the telling, and devious plot of the story. I am grateful for the measured pace, and I could enjoy many more chapters of incremental progress. I have not read any of your work before - so, I shall start right now!

Thanks for your comments.

I live for your feedback.

Xavier Torch.

If you're reading my stuff, "Ulric and Anna" is a stand alone short.

Talla's Temple and Talla's Fallen Temple are novels (make sure to read them in that order, or they won't make sense!)

Thanks for your comments!

Xavier.

Wow. Your stories are just perfect! They are hot and - more important - well paced.

Please continue writing!

Thanks,

Mark

In its own subtle little way, this story is becoming one of the hottest have read on the site. The characters are indeed written perfectly. Anxious to see their relationship develop — and now so many chapters in which to do it. 🙂

May we have one more 15

Nice echo of "The Raven," and also of Hemingway with "they had that between them"

Another well written chapter that continues to capture the relationship building taking place. This is proving to be a hot story, the writing puts you there with the characters as the action takes place.

This is a really Great story!!!! Very nicely written. This imagery is Fantastic!!!!!!

Your writing is excellent, the story is brilliant, but it's your writing that's doing it real justice. I'll continue to read...

Hi Anonymous,

I still enjoy reading comments from people, years later, about this story.

Not normally my thing, but good writing and great character development do wonders. I can't wait to see Bailey back in her room again, after, but with Laura, also after.

This is some of the best shit I’ve ever read! Inspirational as well. Fucking brilliant characters. Brave, sensitive, loving, interesting boundaries haha

Thank you for your work and contribution and badass vibes

Damn! I’m amazed at these first two chapters. It’s so good I thought it was real for a minute.