All Comments on 'Two Hundred Dollars Ch. 05'

I like how you are building up the relation ship between the two main characters. I wonder how much money will be left to pay back when they realize that they are right for each other, or if you are going a different way with the story. Thanks for sharing this.

I would like to read about every singe dollar to be paid.

It's great how you develop their relationship whithout going to fast ahead.

Your comments are welcome and my greatest motivation.

I'm still enjoying writing this one, and I plan to go right to the end (and I have plans right up to the end, so I really, really want to finish it).

I'm glad you're planning to go all the way to the end. I'll be along for the ride.

Considering that Bailey can't admit the truth to Laura, it will be a long time until she admits it to Kent. At this rate, it will be a long, slow escalation for both of them.

I wonder how Bailey will get through the Christmas break. Oh, well, that's two more months.

At last a writer who knows that less is more, that adult readers don't need sex ed lessons (inset tab P or T is not slot A, M or V). Someone who writes grammatical English, believable dialog, character development, dramatic tension (I admit to thinking when you introduced Laura it would be for the same old same old threesome trope - but no, it was for the competition element, not the usual for his Davies but more credibly against each other). No need to suspend disbelief, this is totally believable, lucky coincidences do happen - just not to me. 😊

I’ve read a whole lot of this kind of story and this is without a doubt one of the best. The building tension is spot on and makes me want to keep reading. That is the mark of a well written tale.

This was hot

I'm loving this so far can't wait for more. Got mixed up on the panties for a while colors were mixed up but it happens to the best. Keep going I can't stop reading it.

It keeps on building nicely. Can't wait to see what's next!

So good in so many ways.