All Comments on 'Two Hundred Dollars Ch. 24'

I thought I'd drop in on this story again as it's been a while. I love the pacing and the dynamic between Kent and Bailey. Great to see it heating up slowly over time. Keep up the great work!

Perfect timing :D

I hope this dialogue continues in #25? I am sure it will lead us into thrilling insights and probably more naughty debauchery

I really love this story. It has everything that a great story needs. I am invested in the characters, and they are developed, but we still get to find things out about them as the story goes on. It is flawlessly paced, and it is super sexy. It is no wonder why this story is at the top of the fetish all time list. It is everything that an erotic story should be, and is executed perfectly.

Thank you!

*sigh* Damn! I really need to know now, how they go on with Laura and her desire to get spanked.

This is like a denied orgasm. Naughty, naughty xtorch!

That wasn't my original goal at all, but we are.

Thanks, everyone, for your words of encouragement and support.

Ima kick back with a burger and a brew now.

Cheers,

Xavier.

Your doing a wonderful job with the hardest part of writing; making the people natural and real.

The writing is excellent; probably the best that I have seen on this site. While, in some ways I will hate to see the story end, it seems to be getting a little drawn out and the spanking theme a little tired.

Thanks for a great read, but I hope you will move it along.

I'm glad you're enjoying the characters. Making this seem believable and real enough to suspend your disbelief is the hard part.

That said, the story is reaching its endgame now, so please enjoy the last few chapters.

Cheers,

@XavierTorch

That's terrible news.

Can we hope for a season 2? The characters have so lovely interacting.

By now, they should have collected an impressive collection of naughty pictures.

And this last ones seem to be the crown of it.

I think they should do something with them. Maybe the girls becoming even bolder than here?

That would be nice and kinky :)