All Comments on 'Two In One Is Not Just A Cake'

keep writing long slow seductive stories. make your reader to feel your stories

Its a very good story and I certainly enjoyed reading it.

Your story is good. But there is no difference among the three stories. All are same. And they are bit slow.......!

Good story but a bit to long.

Your living proof that no matter how old you get it does not make you smarter a person of your age writing this crap what a waste of a life.