by 1r1shman101
Interesting start to the story, Can't wait to see where it goes,
One of the best written erotic stories I have read. The prose is clear, crisp, and economical. The characters are well defined. And the tension builds rousingly to the explosive climax. Whew!
Very nicely done. The relationships among the characters are complex, subtle, and nicely evoked. The moment-by-moment narration of the manual sex is done in great detail; yet, surprisingly, the detail never becomes tedious. I'm impressed. 5*.