All Comments on 'Two Moms, Two Laps, Two Hours'

I've read many stories over the years and this series is by far my favorite. Your a very talented writer and have become one of my favorite authors.

This is an amazing story. It's 1 in the morning and I've came twice to this. Thank you.

I was scared of a longiness of the story, but I don't regret any second I've read it. Really great. ;) Only one thing - I felt really sorry for his cousin who didn't enjoy the ride as much as main hero here. I was still waiting for some hot action from his POV...

Love the story! No comparison to the "inspirations" but they aren't the same! 5/5 here! Great sex between horny boys and moms! Were you there? ;-) Good job of writing too!

You carried the whole thing out really well and kept just enough details to keep it interesting... It was undoubtedly long but I loved it and hope you have a part 2 for it

Hot f'n story TX, it had me hard from the beginning. I loved the way you worked both the mom and the aunt into the story.

Maybe as a good way for Alice to really get back even more at Marie she could do both Jeremy and Colin at the same time. And then have Marie walk in on them, and be so turned on by the sight that she would then join in. T hat would be a great story, at least one that I would love to read.

To think that I passed over this story several times thinking there is no way any "sit on my moms lap story" better than silkstockingslover. But god damn this was hot. Maybe a little far fetched but still really hot. I myself wrote a story with a similar theme only with just one mom but I think I really have to do some editing before it is ready to compete with this one. Awesome story. Can't wait for more parts.

You earn this five star story by writing a perfect tall tale, Texas. Nothing more to say.

I'm still not sure I understand how the dad didn't see the two in the other front seat. I guess I missed that part. Oh, and the term baby batter? Don't ever use that again. Eww. LOL. That took me right out of the story for a few seconds.

OMG! That was Awesome!!! That was one of the best incest stories I have ever read on here yet! You had a solid storyline and really great descriptions and details! You must write a sequel to it!

Pretty good. Thanks.

T3 has done it again! In the tradition of other excellent Literotican authors like Silkstockingslover, Whiskeyisgood and others, T3 continues to push the envelope of extremely well written porn. Well Done and Thank You!

For the commenters requesting a sequel or more chapters: there are 9 more chapters already. See the author's page.

It's all great stuff. Don't miss it.

I'm really impressed by your writing ability; this was an excellent piece. Many literotica writers don't tease their readers; you definitely did that. Elongating the story, drawing it out, is one of the best things you can do for this type of writing where the excitement comes from the fact that there is teasing, that these encounters come from someone just not being able to stand the endless teasing anymore.

Excellent job, well done.

Hey so I really enjoyed this story had me wet till the very end. Can't wait to read the others which I have noticed you already posted . Was just wondering if you had one from Collins point of view?

If you skin a pig 🐷 is a lot of extra work. The best way is to get a 55 gallon clean barrel fill it 3/4 Full of water and place it under a tree limb strong enough to hold the weight of the pig and the pullyes to lift the pig and lower the pig into the barrel. Fill the barrel a little over 1/2 full of water bold a fire around barrel and bring water to a boil hook the pig to the pulleys lift the pig up and lower into the water.pull pig up and scrape the hair off. The skin makes the rind on the bacon and ham.

damn man...this was soo hot and so well written.. one of the best i've read

Wat about the aunt...did u fuck the milk aunt later on

I gotta say, I loved the way you wrote that. Too many stories on here focus on the fuck. It's really nice to see a story that has some development.

If you're other stories are similar to this in in characters, development, and ...length...(all the pun intended) then I'd say you're one of the best writers on this site. Good job Sir.

Wonderful story. Not made love in a car for a long time.

REgards

Do It!

You did it. You put it over the top. You jumped the fucking shark. No other story on this website will be able to match this fucking story. I'll never get hot for anything else on this damn website and it's your fault. I hope you're happy.

(Great fucking story.)

i never read long stories but your 7 pages are worth it.

Dad must be a fuckin clueless idiot!

Completely over the top and implausible. Therefore, I loved it. Well done on not taking it too seriously yet writing a great story any way.

Your story brings back a lot of memories from me working as a chauffer Never did anything I couldn't return my own gaze in the shaving mirror for, One night no fights were allowed to take of so people wanted to return home . Ever tried making a smooth gear shift while been given a hand/mouth job by a mom and daughter I have the stories but no where near your ability to build and feel a littoral orgasm using words and imagination, to make the reader feel your actually there looking over their shoulder Cool job .Dunno if my vote mean anything but its yours anyway Apart from the stories being so close to my own fun and games Only passengers though. The best ones were the women who were in charge of where they worked didn't help them a jot as a passenger in my car .There I was boss I called the shots I did notice the higher up the food chain the were the easier I could bring them to not so much to obey but be a little softer more compliant None of them complained bar 1. I married her She had the gall to phone my boss and complain I didn't last long enough I was sent to her address and apologise, which I can tell you didn't sit too well In her bed not con fined to a car I redeemed my self. 6 hours later drove home received a call asking me to dinner next night Been wither since that was 25 years ago give or take Dam what a woman Love your writing please keep in coming

That was an amazing story. Even though it was pretty far fetched from a stance of not getting caught. But I loved it nonetheless! Wish it didn't end and had me yearning for more. I give it a 10! A fucking 10

Fuck.Damn this was a great story.It got my dick soaked in precum.I really loved it from beginning to end.This is actually a reeeeaaaaal sex story.This is great

Completely over the top and ridiculous, therefore I loved it. Well done, hot little fantasy told very much tongue in cheek.

That was one of the best incest stories I've seen so far! It was so fucking hot! I came so many times during this. I loved how much you dragged it out too. Makes the climax way better. I need more!

One of the best incest I read. Got me too hot.

God how I loved reading this story, had me hard the whole time!!! I hope there is more to come between this family.

Holy shit that was good. Damn i got so horny that my dildo wasnt doing enough for me I actually had to call my boyfriend to come and fuck me. Thinking about the story while he was fucking me gave me one of the biggest orgasms ever

What an awesome, hot, sexy, slutty, horny, naughty tale

This is still the hottest of the hot. Not only does it sit atop (pun intended) the mother-son-lap-car-dad theme, it should be in the Literotica All-Time Hall of Fame.

For some reason or other, I've never gotten around to exploring the rest of your Two-Mom series. Perhaps it was concern that the sequels wouldn't rise (as it were) to the level of the original. Perhaps I was distracted by your myriad of other offerings.

I intend to remedy that.

I hope that you expanded upon Colin's activities in a future offering; both front and back seat. ^_^

That was good just as entertaining as the the others I've read..I am very much looking forward to a continuation.. As I'd like to see how Colin handles knowing his cousin tucked his dream girl or if son gets 3some with mom & aunt or if Colin gets his mom.

Great writing. Thank you

pushed to the edge, times two

Will we get to know what happened with Collin and his mom?

Or not here, not now?

Outings needed.

Please

I thoroughly enjoyed this story great read. I would love to read a sequel. Maybe mom lets go of the competition a little allow Jeremy and Aunt Marie a little more fun.

Great story. Needs to continue as mom gives son her ass. And to see what Colin and his mom get into. Maybe all four or five of them share. Dad and son share mom???????

Great story, but you're right. Needs to be much shorter. Some details are appreciated, but the first 2 pages are basically unnecessary. Also, mom stories should not describe her figure. That allows a reader to imagine his/her own mom.

Always a fan of Moms and Sons but this kink with the Aunt first and the competitive nature of the two sisters really brought it home. To paraphrase another great writer, 'More please Sir, could I have MORE. This should be continued and the Aunt and Son split off into it's own one timer. Cheers and keep tapping dem keys.

It's a great story. Surprise I rear the whole thing. But out kept me interested enough

Fucking Phenomenal!

This story was the best of everything I have read!!!

First, it's not too long at all. Just right.

Second, this is not only the very best of the "mom/sister rides on son's/brother's lap in crowded car" genre, it's one of the best of ANY type on this entire site. Very entertaining.

The whole sister competition thing was a brilliant twist.

This story was amazing omfg I was so intreaged about the story line 1000000000000/5

Well done!!!

This story was incredible. I could see it all from back to front and loved every minute of it all. Glad it went on for 7 pages as it stretched it out a nice long way and gave lots for the images to become very real. I do hope you write more, perhaps you have and I just need to find it. Not sure if you can search by name in this site or just have to swing through all the submissions. Might make it easier if there was a search part for titles. Thanks so much for giving me a great wet reaction, a few times over. Loved being the son/nephew for both in my mind

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Very hot story......... until I got to Page 5..........

I grabbed the sides of her shorts, and pushed them down her legs. She lifted her hips up and they slid over her bottom easily. She took over from me and pushed them over her knees letting them fall to the ground.

They are riding down the highway, going home, packed like sardines in the Jeep, and after moving around like a contortionist, Mom pulls her shorts off and lets them fall to the ground but before she gets home she puts her shorts back on??????

Mom would have had to throw them out the window if they hit the ground, so how did she retrieve the shorts to put them back on???????

It's surprising how many authors on Lit have their characters drop, place, throw their clothing on the GROUND when they are in a house, hotel room or a vehicle.

Second read. As always, I've enjoyed your buildup and character development. Sure, you took it over the top. It was expected. Women, even drunk ones, just wouldn't screw their sons around witnesses without the expectation of approval from those witnesses. The taboo is too strong. Given that we're ignoring THAT, you have to assume a certain level of incredulity in the story. You, sir, are a writer. Not a scribbler of naughty tales. Thanks.

readk 2 pages then your last 2, explain your sexual(ness)everything. didn't explore while gone,,,,

It was a good story, but I think Jeremy should have fucked his Aunt any way while he had the chance. The problem with this story nothing was kept secret from Jeremy's mom because the Aunt had a big mouth and could not keep it to her self she had to blab to Jeremy's mom. Jeremy could even keep the sex with the Aunt from his own mom. Not a good thing it will create eventual big family problems down the road.

The only thing better than finding a story this good is finding out that it's just the beginning of a full series! I was bummed when he didn't get to fuck the aunt, but then realized it was because he was going to get the mom which is even better! I happen to be an ass man myself so the mom is already my favorite. Will definitely re-read sometime but right now can't wait to see what happens next!

yh in a nutshell it was the greatest story i have ever read

Wish there was a sequel from Colin's pov! Don't shame Colin!!

You made everything seem so real to Me .. My Cousins Dad had a Jeep and Yes I did have fun with Her in the Backseat .We had all gone Surf Fishing that day . To this Day We still remember that Evening . Also happy Her Dad the Ex Marine did not catch us .. Also Glad that We borrowed some of My 3 month old Niece's Diapers .. I then buried them in the woods . No evidence that way .. The best part was stealing My Cousins Panties .. Man was She Mad about that .. But she couldn't tell anyone either ..

I absolutely love how much detail you put into the setting!! My favourite car ride story yet

I'm not particularly a fan of mother/son incest (perhaps a consequence of issues in my own childhood), but I have been amused by similar mother-son adventures in the past and have generally found Tx Tall Tales's stories stimulating so I decided to give this one a read. Glad I did, early on found myself rooting for both cousins to nail the other's mother on the drive, but actually found the author's climactic dispositions more arousing, only afterwards to be particularly delighted to discover this was merely the beginning of a series. Much entertainment ahead for me I'm sure.

Great story. Works for me

I could never look at my mother with lust in mind. But once I focused one the activities

the writter had me. Fantastic imagination on the writters part. Felt like I was in Jeremy's place, wondering if Dad had a clue. Anticipation, desire, tension ....the thrill

Of discovery..... the climactic end, its all there. :)

It's always a boner killer whenever they're mentioned. Like oh yeah this is actually the destruction of a family no matter how fake. Like mentioning the husband is away or in the front seas is one thing but how much of a fuss this specific husband made at the beginning was a little much. If he really had that much of an issue he still could have put his foot down to keep stuff behind and get it later.

Love incest stories and this one is great. Lucky Dad didn't smell them, but then did he with his last comment?

Id Love to Read The Next Chapter

Thanks

Glad to see it was his mother that was his first to be a man now he better not mess up a good thing. Hope to read more of mother and son bonding.

Great story, very very hot!

Excellent!

Loved the way you build it up.

Please consider a follow up: in more comfortable environs.. It will be lovely to read about Mom / Son / Aunt threesome too...:)

i like your writing style and subject matter

Really made me feel I was there in the woods with them!

Some minor typos re: Plural with s vs. possessive with 's

"It is about Aunt's and their Nephews, as well as Mother's and Son's."

Yes, "Nephews" means more than one nephew. (plural)

(Aunt's...what? Mother's... what? Son's... what?)

Aunt's means something belonging to that aunt. (possessive)

Mother's means something belonging to that mother.

Son's means something belonging to that son.

Aunts means more than one aunt. Mothers means more than one mother. Sons means multiple sons (<--like that).

Amd I hope it never happens, but there's one more: plural possessive, which uses a s' (not 's).

Aunts' means something belonging to more than one aunt.

Thank you.

I can't tell you how much that I enjoyed this story. I had first read "sitting on my sons lap," then found yours and wanted to read "Mom takes a Ride" before reading your homage to those stories. I actually enjoyed it more than the first two stories, your story had good humor, and innuendo before the action started, great build up.

I thoroughly enjoyed the competition between sisters, and hope that there is a sequel continuing the competition. Also I think that Colin deserves more than a good hunting story, maybe the story from his point of view, comparatively to the view, maybe the sisters were not completely forthcoming with what Colin received on the ride home.

I also enjoyed it since I am a Texan myself, wondering if the hog hunting was in West Texas around Mineral Wells, or South Texas around Waco, thinking about two hour drives from North Dallas and the 635 reference. Also being a hunter myself, I enjoyed the accuracy (obviously hunt yourself), and the short paragraph referencing the panty wastes that don't hunt, and of course the women's view, which I also will volunteer to explain the desire to hunt, while they are sitting on my lap.

My favorite story yet!

Thanks

I like your stories. This one was great. You gotta continue with Jeremy and his mother.

He has to fuck her in the ass and go around world, outside, in the park and back yard.

EXCELLENT

"Mom was caught. 'Alright. I get it. Playin' around. But think, Jeremy. What if your father walked up when you were doing that? What then?'

'He'd have to wait his turn,' I quipped. Sometimes my mouth moved faster than my brain."

I fucking laughed so hard!! xD

I totally enjoyed your HOT story! Well written and a pleasure to read!

Excellent turn to the moms/aunts-on-laps theme. Bravo!

Other than lil shit colling everything is absolutely perfect.

I literally just squirted so bravo

If any of you 'men' have got some kind of deep-seated issue with me killin' stuff, as far as I'm concerned you can just pull up your panties, shave your goatee, and move to France, ya damn wusses.

i have a better idea why dont we hunt each other or are ore you fucking coward who runs when he himselfs gets in danger

and i promise to skin you after

Good story. My only complaint is that it's over.

One of the Best "Ride Along Stories" Ever and loved how the son was her number 2 and if the saga continued would be a threesome with dad doing mom in a DP or side by side sisters getting fucked by their sons

Probably the best story I've read. So hot.

The best car ride I ever had.

This is a must-read series. The characters are so well defined. The author has portrayed the way each one could be in a very creative and realistic way. The natural feeling of love, anger, passion, thrust, disapoinrtment joy, and happiness are beautifully written in a captivating story. To the author, I say thanks for this, I have not been able to not read them all. I still have to read the last one, but it will be later today.

Ho what a ride, you got me hard just reading it, Poor Auntie never got the ride of her life, I would love to hear a follow up story. of how Mum & Son enjoyed their new Relationship, and where they went to enjoy Sum Good Private Fucking. I wish it was me!

i loved it!

Absolutely awesome!!! The grammar police and length swat team need to appreciate the content and save their comments. Lol I picked up and literally could not put down, detail, back story and sex kept me glued to what was coming next. Thank you and looking forward to more of your outstanding stories!

This needs to be made into a high quality porn movie!!!

I badly wish you would continued this story. The open ended conclusion is nice for the imagination but I want more lol!

Excellent.

It's a very good read it could have been a bit longer to finish the ending

Excellent story, even if a little absurd, though you did warn us :-) Sometimes you just have to go with a story for the fun of it, and a little whimsy once in a while is OK.

One of the things about a story like this is you have to suspend disbelief for it to work. For me, it was the blocked vision. I used to be an OTR truck driver. Good visibility from the cab is critical, and I'd never put something in the way of my sight lines. That said, there are a lot of people who are not so picky-every winter I see them peeking out through little holes in the snow because they're too lazy to clear their windshields.

I won't beat you up over the apostrophes, since the grammar nazis have already had their say, but they did make for some bumpy reading. You've got twice as many stories on here as I do, so you have a pretty good idea how this works. But I will make this observation: no matter how many times I proofread a story-and I read them over til I'm sick of them-I still find mistakes in the published story. On the whole, it read well.

Anyway, enough on grammar and style. I loved the build, especially with Jeremy and Alice. That he ever so slowly got her where she would let him bury his apparently substantial cock in her pussy-and thank you for not giving him a 10" monster, too cliched, though I'd have been happier if she'd had a hairy pussy, but that's my preference; I think the shaved look smacks of pedophilia-then ride it eagerly once he was inside her, begging him to cum in her as they reached the end of their road, figuratively and literally, was hot, hot, hot. The capper for me was at the end, though, when his cum was leaking out of her pussy and down her leg while she was unloading the car. Nothing hotter than sloppy sex!!

Now....how long til Alice is pregnant??

It was the BEST FUCKING STORY OF MY LIFE. Man you have got to make a sequel, im begging you.....

One OF THE BEST FUCKING STORIES ON THIS SITE.

Honestly, the whole series is damn amazing.

It made me cum a nice load while jerking off

In my opinion, this was well written. Nicely done!

I Love this story!!! I think I have read it at least 3x

Third or fourth "mom on son's lap in car with dad driving..." story. At least one of them was really good, but yours is clearly the best. Truly. Although I wasn't wild about the hunting, that's because of me, not your writing. I understand the essential role it played in the story. And I'm much happier with dead hog than some beautiful buck with a great rack indicating that he's young, powerful, and nearly the last deer to die under natural circumstances (i.e., wolf pack hunting deer, taking the weak and the sick, not the one with the most incredible rack). And I appreciate that you could have made all sorts of puns with "racks" (e.g., who had the best rack), so thank you for resisting the urge, if it ever arose. But back to what you DID write, it was really, really well done. The forbidden sex was amazingly well written - not something easily done, you established a fitting backstory, developed your characters, paced the story perfectly. And your writing is clever, funny (sometimes REALLY funny)... just really a great story. Writing this knowing that there are several others out there with which this will be compared, took some guts. But I get the sense that you relished the competition, and indeed, you bested the best. I look forward to reading other stories you've written. Great job. You are a gifted writer.

(9/18/2021) Yup, This was a fun read. Not sure why, but I don't feel bad for the dad. You didn't make him out to be a villain and maybe he's not so clueless as we may think. He cares about his wife, son, and even his handsy nephew. I like what his mum said that his father and he were the only two and will always be only two. I really do hate those mummy becomes an any-dick slut stories. I'm glad you made a series out of this narrative. I hope Jeremy gets another crack at aunty boobies. You gotta throw a bone to the poor nephew though. I feel sorry for this poor unlucky character. It was funny how mummy had to help her sister look for her panties after sitting on her poor son's lap. 5 stars and this goes on my favorites list.

Really enjoyed the story. The bouncing around in the back of the jeep was a little hard to follow. Something really I would have liked to see the story different when they switch seats repeating it seemed a little drawn out . Overall like the story just was hoping for something different when the mom became involved.