by chris99999
Loved it! Can't wait until the next chapter! Five stars and a favorite point!
Love your story and love the fact that you let your desire win over your inhibitions about having sex with your son. Sex is wonderful and if done right it doesn't matter who's fucking you as long as your both enjoying it.
A little rushed, and spend more time on sexual details. Looking forward to more as this story has so many opportunities and potential.
The story started well but the swapping killed it and it became disgusting.
A decent I/T story gets ruined by turning it into the awful harem/swap/everybody knows model that completely ruins at least 80% of I/T stories. The whole thing about I/T is the taboo part. When you treat the love interest like a commodity to be traded on the stock market, and it's no longer a forbidden, secret relationship you might as well go the full trip and have the moms end up as working street hookers while their sons use the proceeds to by them drugs. It couldn't be much more disappointing than what you just did.
Nice story. I hope there is a follow-up. I am looking forward to reading about the swap.
Can either son have a bit of chest hair for his muscular chest? That would be a good sight for his mother!
An enticing story. I found the lack of family history lacking. How did Harry’s father die? Illness,car accident, etc and how long ago? Never mind the time Jess had gone without sex,, Harry had gone the same time without a father. Harry would have seen and heard his parents making love to have a clue about sex and he could have asked Dad. Same for Amy history. A follow up story is needed Thank you for writing this story
This story was great, it showed a true dynamic in this type of relationship. The 19 year old son is still inexperienced. So the disappointment in the mother's orgasm at the end was expected. But without a doubt mama bear will give baby bear an education, and they will be lovers for years to come.
Hurry Hurry Hurry get part two out. We have to read about the swap. 5*****'s
More than 5 stars. Very well written. I enjoy your subtle choice of words. Please, please go on with a second chapter. Can’t wait what happens next.
I had some trouble following this story but it sounded exciting. Harry bailing out the 1st time brought me down.
I gave it 3 stars