All Comments on 'Two Nights in Paradise Pt. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

The main flaw in Two Nights in Paradise is its brevity. Whether the introduction, plot, character development, or love scenes, brevity is the problem. Everything about this what has true potential as a great romantic story needs to be explored in more depth.

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