All Comments on 'Two Sisters Seduce Brother Pt. 03'

It's a great story but needs creampies imo. No reason not to since they can go on the pill and they can do anal imo. Love the relationship between all of them passionate and loving.

I really liked the story until you brought the friends into it. Unfortunately that ruined the story for me. I don’t understand why you just can’t have the siblings together & explore their feelings for each other. It just seems that this is how most stories end up following this same path of always bringing in other people. Just my opinion.

Thanks for your feedback, I appreciate the opinions and feedback. As I am a new writer and a harem is one of my interests I thought it would be safer to write about it. I don't think I have the skill yet to delve too deep into the relationship and feeling of my characters. The story will be mostly focused around the siblings with other characters adding a bit more spice to the lovemaking scenes.

true incest love never shares their love with out siders. Even never cheat on. Because it comes from their blood.

I have to agree with the other comments. This was a good story until you brought the friends into it. As someone commented incest love doesn’t share with outsiders. Mostly because of the special bond but also because it gives more chances of being found out. I read your comment about being a new writer, which I enjoy your writing & it’s very good. You also said you wanted to write a story about a harem which is fine if that’s what your comfortable with I just think maybe you shouldn’t of started with an taboo story about siblings. Maybe you’ll take these comments into consideration & write the story differently but if it continues on the path of involving others I for one won’t continue reading.

Thank you for the comments I appreciate the feedback. I think for the next story I will try delving into writing about the love of siblings, it is another interest of mine as well as harem stories. As I have already included more women into this story I don't see a viable way to 'write them off' as of yet and I think they will be instrumental for the ending I had in mind.

A shame you are going to keep the others in the story. They ruined the story for me! You can came up with any excuse to “write them off.” It was a one & done thing & it’s over! It was a good story with just the siblings.

I enjoyed the story but must agree with the majority on here that the addition of other girls is a distraction. It started off good as being between siblings. There are options for writing the other girls out. As maybe a one off hook up. I would lime to see a future written in for the siblings with kids and a life. What becomes of meg after college since kate is a teacher? I await the next chapter and hope you can correct the siblings future

Love this series. Can't wait to read more. Don't forget about Katherine. Keep the chapters cumming! Jim

HI Magical 69, When will part 4 be out, been quite a while and we are all waiting with anticipation. Thanks for the great story.

I've enjoyed this so far. I don't agree that adding the two friends is a distraction - I think you did a good job wwriting them in. I don't believe in "the more the merrier," and it can be done badly, but that's not the case here. I'm also interested in what will come of Katherine, his boss/sister's friend - that seems to have potential if done right. But you've done it right so far, so please keep going. Looking forward to reading further chapters.

HI Loved the story,read twice and looking forward to more ????