All Comments on 'Two Soldiers'

A great creative plot line. You need to continue our two characters journey as war continues. I can see many more adventures worthy of their unique relationship. On to chapter 2 !!

Wow! That was an amazing story! Finally, I found a story of my favorite genre, involving muscular women. Most of such stories are garbage or in the best case, only 'meh', or they’re about abusing and violent femdom.

Your story was great! Such a refreshing read! I really enjoyed their chemistry, and that their relationship turned into love! Apart from that, there was an interesting storyline and adventurers. I had some doubts about the story on the first page, where there was a lot of info and sci-fi techno babble, but it was only for a moment.

Good job, well deserved 5 stars!

Thanks for sharing...

Very nicely done, although slightly unfulfilled I found myself short changed wanting for more!

I do hope you take the time to give us a sequel?

Thanks again

Great story, we hope you continue. Does the Salamander get any sex from the Larger women? Five stars!

Well done and Thanks for sharing your story with us

I do hope you keep growing this work

Thanks Again ........

5 Stars

I was so immersed into the story and characters, it was a movie in my head. Beautfully written, great story and premise which we hopefully will be able to read more of.

Anybody want to tell me how you have 'A moon off the coast of an entirely lifeless ice world'? A moon in the orbit of an entirely lifeless ice world is usually how it happens. The other *might* happen if the moon fell out of ORBIT and crashed off the coast, as moons generally aren't found on planets.

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Top Shelf!

11/10!!!!!

Cool adventure/love story 🤖 We are hooked and orbiting your pen, waiting to see where our antagonists are off to next.

Peace and please, give us more ……. 🫱🏼🙏✍️☮️

This was a great well thought out story we need a part 2 3 4 5 and 6. I’m really impressed and love this story definitely worth the 5 star rating but deserves a 20 out of 10 keep up the great work

Yowzah! MORE PLEASE! Thaanks for sharing and good luck w/ the writing :)