by little_miss_vixen
Your story got me hot... I had to Jerk off reading it... ty... it felt Great... Just wish you could have watched me...
It is obvious you are really a male writer, No female would use the verbage you used. Just publish this under "Gay Sex."
I enjoyed the story. The setting was on the edge of believable, and your use of progressively more intense language as things 'heated up' added a great deal to my ability to get caught up in the story. I'm writing, however mostly because I was angered by an earlier comment and wanted to share my feelings (and report to the moderator) with you.
I wrote:I don't know if the comment violates your standards in a strict sense, but I have to believe that on a site that celebrates erotic enjoyment , gay-bashing is more than not welcome. I trust that the reasons I call it 'gay-bashing' are self-evident. The suggestion that it be put in 'gay sex' is made in a derogatory manner. Aside from being patently wrong (the sex described is heterosexual), the importance of the author's gender or orientation, seems rather irrelevant Further, your site is spectacularly enjoyable due to the generosity of the authors, anyone who endeavors to make your writers less comfortable should -in my opinion- be invited to take their small minds- and smallmindedness elsewhere.
Thanks for the great story and please, keep writing.
You made me cum reading this. I wished you could have watched me. Hmmmmm, sexy ;)
BRILLIANT STORY WOULD HAVE LOVE MORE PARTS BUT I SEE THIS WAS THE ONLY ONE T= YOU HAVE WRITTEN IM SORRY TO SAY PITY BUT THERE STILL TIME FOR EVEN MORE
The story is great. It is believable, descriptive and realistic. Also, I love that it is well written, and contains no typos or misspelled words.