All Comments on 'Two Ugly Ducklings'

Yet another author who doesn't know diddly about the proper slang terms for this kind of story. Keeps using "come/coming" when it should be "cum/cumming" for use referring to an orgam or semen. Such bad writting harms and wrecks stories.

is as ignorant as many stupid posters on here. It was a good story.

Follow your fantasies girl and don't let sad weenie comments about terminology and acceptable misspellings stand in your way. Takes a lot more courage to write a story than be a doofus critic. Stay with it -- you have the makings of an entertaining writer.

FIVE: This was a really nice story. Thank you for writing it.

Thank you to all for the positive feedback. It is greatly appreciated. Even the negative.

thank you thank you, thank you so much.

:D

We need more from you. Keep writing please.

There is no such thing. Cum/cumming is slang, period. Come/coming is proper English and has been around longer than any of us have been alive. If it bothers the anonymous poster so much that the author chooses not to use the porn version of words then maybe he/she is reading less for enjoyment and more for something to complain about. It was a good story. Keep going and good luck!