All Comments on 'Two Weeks'

This was so incredibly hot and sexy. Thank you. I loved it.

one of the best writer on Literotica! We want more:)

Wrong ending, just wrong.

Plenty of action, I like how the mother fully committed to the son, and the father is a useless cuckold without knowing of course. A second chapter would be good, just to see where this goes.

Great story! How about a sequel taking place a few months later with a pregnant very horny mother?

What a great story. I loved it. AAAAAA++++++

We need another chapter.. they keep fucking.. Dwight catches them.. Roman kicks his ass.. they move and have more babies

I'm only on the 2nd page and we've already gotten through what must've been a dozen different names for his penis, with bangers such as "diamond-cutter" and "barrel". I couldn't help burst out laughing.

Your use of language is original and delightful. I had to look up the word jejune and still have no idea what a "primrose moment" means.

I do think you should try and reign it in a little though. It can draw a bit too much attention to itself, though sometimes with comedic results. Overall it's a hot story. Thank you.

An epilog with mother being pregnant would be Hot!

Was so excited to see you posted a new story. You have to write more often, for the good of the public

The Crash course sex story.. you need a CH 5.. as much as I enjoyed this story.. you need a CH 5 of Crash course Sex.. Kyles football game, her hubby's fishing trip.. man that would be a great final chapter

llfen you are right. This story is weak.

Not bad but this may have been a tad better if it was stretched out into more parts but it definitely could use more

Great story, thanks!

Wonderful piece of written art. This took me back to the first time I read Just One Box. Keep up the good work, I hope we can continue to indulge ourselves in such beautiful incestuous adventures of mother and son.

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Amazing story! Thought it was gearing up for a anal scene which would have been hot! Cant wait to see what you do next

Wonderful story! Can't wait for your next work! Just curious, is "Independence Day" going to get a sequel?

(4/20/2022) Well, what can I say? Brilliant! Happy wife happy life. I'm a guy that always roots for the wronged party. Because hubby believed he could get away with some strange on the side he gave the real man in the house an opportunity that he would not have had. The Alpha male took what was his. It may be mean to say, but I would like to imagine Rebbeca telling him that the child wasn’t his son but his grandson at some point. Especially if he had decided to restart his affair. Dwight Got what he deserved, IMO. Great story. Five stars.

Loved this story but you should haven continued till she told her husband the truth and then kicked his ass to the curb for his cheating on her for years, 5 stars !!!

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