All Comments on 'Two Weeks at the Playground Ch. 03'

Very very good keep up the good work we expect more of it.Congrats.

That was so fucking hot, absolutely loved reading it! But it seems there might be another chapter coming soon? Seems this story isn't quite finished yet, right?

Excellent chapter. Incredibly hot. I do not know how you beat this one, but can't wait to find out. I suggest writing the story in word or something with a spell.grammar checker. It was well written, but some mistakes stood out.

The details of your stories can be pictured they have that

much detail. Looking forward to future chapters but can't wait for

Billy to get a GF at the end that he can use the skills that he learned

during his 2 weeks with Mom.

Also Miss Helen, her son with Billy and Monica hook up

in some girl on girl action.

Thanks for writing but please proof read but you still get 5plus stars

It would be totally sacreligious if you stopped this story there. Monica and Billy have several days left at the resort. You opened a door there talking about Miss Helen and Monica, you need to expand on that idea, plus you could include include a little son swapping in the mix. Just a suggestion, really loved the series so far please continue.

We need Monica, Helen and Billy to get together. And at 40, Monica isn't too old to get pregnant. There's been no mention of birth control. The story is hot so far.

Please get further chapters proof read.

This one pushed me over the hill. Had to help myself during this time of lockdown. Keep them cumming... I know I will.

wow good stuff

Spelling or grammar problems aside.....a very sexy story....