All Comments on 'Two Weeks at the Playground Ch. 06'

jumped the shark

Overall this has been a fantastic series with lots of hot action

However, it feels incomplete. It would have been great if you had some additional chapters for the other couples attending the retreat. The new zealanders, thai and the indian couples fell out of the radar after chapter 4.

I agree to more chapters about the other moms and sons. Over all great series tho!!!!

I enjoyed you new story but I totally agree with anonymous comment #2 that it story is not completed. Other couples out of radar. Thanks

Please continue on with the series.

Wonderful story telling but as with the other comments there does need to be at least one more chapter. Perhaps his mother and Miss Helen get pregnant by him and the further along they get in their pregnancy, the hotter for each other and him they become.. Perhaps bring in a third older woman, possibly a grandmother (?).

Still, one of the better stories I have read!

I think you should use the word cunt a lot more, rather than other terms. I totally adore cunt eating it tongue fucking and getting drunk on cunt juice. Love fucking a sexy woman while she eats her besties cunt then swap around and keep doing each other till we all pass out, and start over as soon as we recover. This comment covers all the chapters in this series, so smoking hot. My two live in fuck buddies and I will act out a lot of the the scenes in this series for weeks to CUM. Cunt crazed sex maniac Lanc’s UK

I agree.. . one more chapter with 4 pages is needed to wrap up the story. Share with us what happen to them the next 20 years. You can do it. We all know u can !!!!

Got to have more!

Terrific story!!! No holes in the plot like in the Motherfucker series where there's serious issues. :-)

DT

wish i had this type of mom...and we got away like that...it is fun to be with two women..and have the type of sex they enjoy...it is great to watch your lovers eat each other even when you unload in one...i need to find that again...Jo Maddox you nailed what i wished i had

So mom went from not sure about fucking her son to full blown mommy slut.then mommy is unsure about lesbian sex with Helen to now marrying her pushing her son to second place knowing he wanted her over anyone else.

Bitch move,by staying on the island they could have switched to a married life and let Helen be the live in partner.

The imagination of the authors here never cease to amaze me. Great story!

Lots of fun

Loved this series! Thanks so much for writing!