All Comments on 'Two Weeks Gone'

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slowhand21slowhand216 months ago

Wish Sammi could have been staring into Jolene’s eyes as she realized she was going to die.

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Well crafted problem-free story

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

good story, although you mixed up Seth and Andy's names a couple times.

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

A good read enjoyed it.

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

Lee doesn't seem bright enough to run a business.

LadyLoreLadyLoreabout 2 months ago

You should have added another chapter the way you ended this

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