by lovebobby
The story was doing well and then it became a total wreck when anal sex was added. Damn why do so many authors now believe NO story is complete or written unless they include anal sex, they must live in a sewer to have that mind-set.
...the nipple clamps and paddle on page 3,
I quit reading.
Do not really care for anal either
(although I've read Literotica for so long, I've kinda gotten used to putting up with it in non-Anal stories).
It was especially unrealistic during Katie's first time (in the prequel Her First Time).
Writing is good, and I like the storyline (girlfriend's hot daughter),
but finally too many quirks that were not my quirks.
Paul in Oklahoma