by pjwolf
Great story, how about more of it? Let the girls go home and start a long time love affair..Maybe they could even pimp the bleach blonde slut out...
Didn't see that twist coming at the end, either!
Just a great story, well written. It kept me hard and like the guys on the other side of the wall, I came big time. Keep writting. Write for the girls and for the boys out here!
WOW! I must say, I was not sure when I saw the term "glory hole" in the title. It seemed a bit raunchy for me at first, but you made the well-written story work. I found myself getting wet in anticipation by the time they walked into the bar. The character development and pace was great too. As a woman, I liked this fantasy. Sometimes we get fed up with our guys and only having to deal with their cocks would suit me just fine. The ending twist was great (and funny, in an evil way). I am sure that any woman (myself included) who has discovered that her man has a "wandering dick" will appreciate the "treat" that Rachel dished up. Charlie had it "cumming" to him.
Please, continue this story. I want more.
I once watched a video showing a woman sucking on a cock that was sticking through a glory hole. Something about it stuck with me and I get wet every time I think about it. I would never be so daring (who knows where those cocks have been), but I can safely live out my fantasy through Rachel. I am also bi-curious, so your hot story worked for me there too. I have to read it again...just thinking about it makes me want to cum again. Any chance for a sequel?
the twist at the end was hilarious.i hope you write a follow up
I have to admit, I was originally a little skeptical about this series. Glory Holes have no appeal for me, and conjure up images of horny men getting off with and by other horny men. However, I was intrigued when I began to read the prologue of chapter 3, so I decided to give this chapter a look. Am I ever glad that I did. I found myself incredibly aroused, especially when Rachel began to lick Jenny's pussy while getting it from the stranger's cock.
I also loved the twist at the end. You have a wicked sense of humor.
Now onto Chapter 2.
I agree...this was "different." but in a good way. It was actually kind of hot too...and the twist at the end is priceless.
Excellent work. Didn't realize there was a chapter 2 until it was, er, too late.. But I read it anyway and loved it! Great ending.
that was fantastic, im really into lesbian sex and the pussy licking part really turned me on. the twist at the end, pure evil. id hate to be one of your exes lol. absolutely fantastic!!!
Absolutely loved the ending. Oh and the whole story was pretty frigging good. I haven't read any of your stories yet but I imagine I will. But I am hoping that you w=ill have a follow up story to this one.