All Comments on 'U Turn'

Hell, if my sister wanted a 'bat' that much, she could have had mine between her legs at the end of every inning!

I really liked your story but I was really turned off by the bitter, foul language exchanged between brother and sister. GO CUBS! haha :)

One poster didn't like the nasty language; that's his right. Some folks are turned on by using the nastiest language to raunch up the encounter; obviously these characters, and possibly the author as well, are among that number.

well I didn't have a sister but if I had I would have wanted her to be just like that.

with overtures of outright raunchiness. Thank You. Ronnie W.

Very detailed, and not too quick as I have noticed other submissions on this site to be. Others like to get straight to the sex in about 2 short paragraphs, where you have developed a superb story line and really enhanced the sexual experience, especially how the first couple times they DIDNT do anything. Bravo...not to mention it was totally hot ^_^;;; cheers mate

I lost intrest at the ee size, whatever happened to all the women i see in kansas city with b and c's or even just d's like mine.

Loved the story. As for 'dirty' words during sex, I thing this heats up the sucking and fucking of any love making.

Makes my cock get so fuckin' hard.

this is unbeleivable so fucking hard love it guess i came 3 times thanks

I read this quite a while back and it is still as exciting as the first time I read it.