All Comments on 'Ugly Duckling (Ribbons) Ch. 02'

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Rachel has to be one of the most loveable characters in literature that you just have to cheer for, and it is fantastic when something good happens to her. It is great that she found love with Kira, someone who can really make her see her true value. Now all we need is a chapter where Rachel's asshole mother is strung up!

got me so wet and horny.........mmmmmmm more please!

Hey Lisa, although this story was good, I didn't connect with it in the same way as the last one, I felt a lot of the emotion was gone and it was a very dramatic change from an innocent exploration to something...less so I guess. Try to stop me from reading part 3 though!

I agree with Kimmy's first comment but I still loved and and am definitely going to read part 3.

Fantastic story.

That was SO hot! I love Rachel, and I can relate to her. I want to know if Kira has a twin sister ... for me?

I wanted to thank you for taking me on a journey to where I've never been before. I have read your story 4 times, and every time the results were more intense between my legs. I am a 38 or old school teacher and recently divorced from my husband. Your story aroused my sexual desires for something I have never experienced before. I now walk around my house naked touching myself. I rub my wet fingers all over my face to smell my clit juices, and now I love to suck on my fingers after having them deep in my pussy. Thank you for opening a whole new world to me. - p19e63c @hushmail.com

Chapter 2 was every bit as good as chapter 1, perhaps better. Thank you for sharing it with us!

I Love Your complex mind and erotic vision.

That was so erotic.

...switching tenses in mid-story is a huge no-no.