All Comments on 'Ugly Duckling'

Great story with development & ending. Luv it!!!

I'm confused. Did Waylon tell his wife that he was going to have sex with Melissa? I'm trying to figure out why he thought having sex with Melissa was the only way to keep her off his back. If Celine doesn't know then he is no better then Kerry or Melissa. What kind of love is that?

Hope there's a part 2, she needs to get her fat ass fucked hard...

This is a good story. Can't wait for the next installment.

Completely amoral and raunchy. The situation sounds like a Faulkner novel.

The dialogs are just brilliant.

The author does seem to have a tendency to hang us out to dry. Where is

FTDS when you need him?

When dose the sister in law come into the sex?

Imaginative and VERY well-written!! Great dialogue, and you handled the backstory without the usual LW-style of overexplaining to the extent the story is lost. Masterful writing!

Outstanding, yet another unfinished series.

Not sure if I even liked this one. Seems a lot like rape and cheating on a spouse to me, but the sex was good. Does Celine know that Waylon if fucking her mother and if so is she okay with it? Guess I'll have to read the next chapter to find out.