All Comments on 'Um, Both, I Guess Ch. 03'

by Jensbro

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AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
You need help!

I am assuming you never written a story? Get someone to help you!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Lovely

I love how the brother and sister are tentatively exploring their sexual boundaries. So hot.

cuckrobincuckrobinover 5 years ago
Great story ...

Another great installment, Jensbro. And I don't see anything wrong with your writing style. Yes, I wish each chapter was longer, but so long as you keep writing I don't mind waiting for the next submission - it gives me time to replay everything in my head. I love wearing panties & other lingerie, and really love the idea that a girl would enjoy seeing me do it. The fact that your girl is also your sister makes it hotter!

PijaconchaPijaconchaover 5 years ago
Addiction is great

Painfully addictive story. Please continue, I love it

o2baPrinceo2baPrinceover 5 years ago
Great story

I like it...

Trekkie469Trekkie469about 5 years ago
story is progressing well

I love how the story is progressing. My dick got extremely hard thinking about the two of you wanking in front of each other.

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