All Comments on 'Unbelievable'

No sex but oddly compelling. It makes me wonder if there's something else to be told. Who is Veronica? How did she come to be? This story begs for more info, especially background on Veronica. I would appreciate a follow up please.

oh my god you can't just end it like that. i'm hoping there's at least more stories set in this universe because this NEEDS to continue

Love your stories but they always leave you wanting more. Another chapter please. :)

...to be an erotic story concerning hypnosis? If so, then you forgot to bring the eroticism! This story has potential, but that's all it has going for it. It did not even slightly move my cock to an erect state...not even in the slightest! File this one under 'non-erotic,' if you will.