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Candy_Kane54Candy_Kane54about 4 years ago

Very nice first effort. Could use some editing but a nice story nonetheless.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Part 2 please

Part 2 please

WAT456WAT456almost 4 years ago
It's Okay!

Jamie, it's okay! The EMTs got to me in time! Looking forward to part 2, when they let me out of the ICU!

** gasp, gasp **

JamieHunter326JamieHunter326almost 4 years agoAuthor
Thank you!

Thank you!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

I gave it 5* but only because 6 wasn't an option. Literally dripping after reading this, more please!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

That was amazing. The build up and tension... then just being taken adoringly but just rough enough. Thank you so much

Nicole2023Nicole2023about 1 year ago

Oh wow great start

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I'm a writer who would definitely appreciate any and all feedback. Stories: Jamie & Shaie -Unbidden -Unbidden Pt. 2 -Unbidden Pt. 3 -Untethered Pt. 1 -Untethered Pt. 2 -Untethered Pt. 3 -Undaunted Waiting To Happen

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