- Lesbian Sex
- Unbidden Pt. 03
- Comments
All Comments on 'Unbidden Pt. 03'
by JamieHunter326
- 15 Comments
Anonymousalmost 4 years agoYou have a gift for writing; please provide us with more stories
Anonymousalmost 4 years agoYour story is so fresh and well-written, I love all its details — that slow burn and the chemistry between two opposite personalities. I look forward to what you have in store for us! Thank you so so much and Good Luck xx
JamieHunter326almost 4 years agoAuthorIt's been a great learning experience writing and publishing this one and I appreciate all your votes, feedbacks, and comments!
Anonymousalmost 4 years agoThis has been one of my favorite reads on this site. It's incredible how you're able to craft something so real in only a few pages. I have found myself rereading the entire series over and over. I'm sad this is the last of their story, but I'm looking forward to more of your work.
Anonymousalmost 4 years agoTense and so erotic; characters knowable in so few “pages”. You write well and the story lines are captivating. Looking forward to more while rereading posted stories.
Anonymousalmost 4 years agoWell written... Omg just wow!! Cant wait to read more ❤️
_island ph girl 🏝️
JamieHunter326almost 4 years agoAuthorThank you! I'm so happy you guys liked this one.
Writing Shaie and Jamie had been such a pleasurable experience (in many, many ways) for me so, I wanted to journey with them some more, too.:)
ArmyGal33almost 4 years agoThe actual pacing and plot itself was wonderful. I only say too short because I was thoroughly and happily engrossed in this series and could easily keep on reading. This was a fun and sexy journey. Well done and thank you for sharing it with us.
Anonymousalmost 4 years agoAmazing, pleeeeasse write more, not necessarily this story I just love your writing. Nothing Insanly cheeeey that rips me out of the story, it's completely immersive.
ramblin2020over 3 years agoLoved it. My feedback would be that the intro felt a little chaotic. I think a little more background on Jamie and her state of mind would have painted a more compelling picture. With that said, it was sooo good as it was. Thanks.
Anonymousover 3 years agoShaie’s character underwent a big change. In the first two chapters she was a very dominating character and now suddenly she isn’t. Seems a bit off.
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