All Comments on 'Unbroken Ch. 05'

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kelvinvictorkelvinvictorover 6 years ago

Aidan is F*****g amazing!!!! I love him.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
LOVE IT

amazing.. am falling in love with your story

josranvictorjosranvictorover 6 years ago
How did luis end up having Aidan!!!!!!!????

God i just cant stop wondering..Luis out of the blue ended up having Aid??? to make matters worse he is likely to have had wat he wanted..Its lyk abet to him

i hate him for that,sure i hate him

oh so Aidan fallen in love first???I knew it,its nyc and so good how he has given it to luis..That virginity

but now that u're taking many more weeks atleast give us more chapters that wil sustain us,please

Oh we have anew friend,hanna hahaha

i've lyked the character vanalas indeed the crown is urs

josranvictorjosranvictorover 6 years ago

Every time am loving this,my Aidan is magnificen and unique,i love him and damn that luis who's just afucker

the sex scene was mwaaaah and romantic though it was suprising...Oh that kiss for sure if it was realistic frm luis it would be best but he's just afucker

i really lyked how Aid punished both the guys and that hotel bitch,hehehehe

van plz just kno that i love every bit of it,i cant complete all..u're my favorito baby

the theme song is power of love by celine dione

i really love u vanalas,plz my king post soon

am sleepy goodnight

school is waiting for me

josranvictorjosranvictorover 6 years ago
goodmorning handsome vanalas..

I am here remembering Aidan's words"u'l never have me"but see,their hormones got out of control and they ended up......Huhu,i wonder

but wat hurts is the prince doesnt care,fuck him...our bodies arnt that cheap to serve

no wonder,luis also said not to ever and ever fuck Aid,but he made love not even fucking,hahaha but he's aplayer,i hate him

oh van,how u changed hanna was mwaaaah

now i have to go to school...I appreciate ur every work,i love u most and we love u too

i hate knowing that 2 weeks u wont post

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